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Upcoming MLP Story: The Black Apple

Sat Mar 22, 2014, 9:55 PM
MY LITTLE PONY: THE FUTURE IS MAGIC
"The Black Apple"


   

    During a school lecture on the various areas around Tambelon Island, which includes that of the forbidden Black Fog Forest, Candy Apple mentions the rumored witch that is said to live there, and this places her in a great deal of trouble with her teacher and mother Mrs. Cheerilee Apple.

   After a short session of detention, Starlight and the rest of her friends are very curious to why Mrs. Cheerilee was so upset and try to find the reason behind it.

    Even after asking their parents, none of them wish to speak on the matter of the rumored "Witch of the Woods" for reasons they cannot explain. This makes things even more suspicious.

    But in the end, with each of the Yearling Six's families hiding something, the time may be coming for the parents to reveal a great truth that they once promised to keep secret forever...but can they? 

    Find out!!

   

FRIENDSHIP LESSON: Sometimes it is important to speak the truth, even if you wish to protect those you love from something that you feel they must not know.



MAIN CHARACTERS: Candy, Tyke, Shani, Starlight, Delicacy, and Gust.

MAIN ANTAGONIST: Grenadier Apple

SECONDARY CHARACTERS: The Mane Six, Courageous Heart, Big Macintosh, Cheerilee, Soarin, Subira, Chief Thunderhooves, Queen Chrystala, and more.


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:icondragonwar23:
dragonwar23 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Read the chapter and It was awesome. Also I can't shake this feeling that the kingdom is gonna turn into a battlefield again

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In the brightest day and in the darkest night,
No evil force shall escape our might,
When darkness falls and hope is lost,
Beware the power of Harmony's Light!
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Courageous-of-Light Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You might be somewhat right :shrug: :giggle: :nod: :D
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:icondragonwar23:
dragonwar23 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
And if war does come you and your guard will need to be well prepare, so I was thinking that I can be the dragon for the job. Not only I'm a great warrior but I'm also a great blacksmith and inventor. So if it's okay I can join the adventure and help you protect your kingdom

--
In the brightest day and in the darkest night,
No evil force shall escape our might,
When darkness falls and hope is lost,
Beware the power of Harmony's Light!
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:iconcourageous-of-light:
Courageous-of-Light Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, but I think it's going to take more than guards to protect the castle :D
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:icondragonwar23:
dragonwar23 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Of course you'll need The Light and The Elements of Harmony for the job. But with me on your side I can give you guys some extra firepower.

For example: I can upgrade some of your weapons

For Twilight Sparkle a magical suit of armor where not even the strongest dark spell can break through

And For Oath Sworn an extra blade on her fighting stuff

As for you Courageous, some light powered stick grenades. And most importantly The Champion's Shield. With this shield and your Light you can deflect your enemy's attack right back at them

--
In the brightest day and in the darkest night,
No evil force shall escape our might,
When darkness falls and hope is lost,
Beware the power of Harmony's Light!! 
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:iconcourageous-of-light:
Courageous-of-Light Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, We shall see should evil ever arise again...which it no doubt will Emote king - :emoteking: 
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:icondragonwar23:
dragonwar23 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well, you can't be too prepared in case of an emergency. So should you ever need me just ask :)

--
In the brightest day and in the darkest night,
No evil force shall escape our might,
When darkness falls and hope is lost,
Beware the power of Harmony's Light!
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:iconcourageous-of-light:
Courageous-of-Light Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I will :salute:
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riky9797 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I can't waiting for the next chapter! :happybounce: 
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AZREAL258 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
This is going to be great and awkward. 
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